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| "The War for Raccoon City" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: ColtaColl On: March 25, 2009 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT. Not just saying that because I recently fell in love with Resident Evil, but because I want to read the whole thing. WRITE MORE OF THIS!!! Beside that, there are some simple things... Don't leave anything out! DX Maybe a little more detail?
| Title: Lovely writing! Pretty Cool Story!
Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chello, and hello. Do I really need to tell you who the heck this is? I think not. Anyways, for the most part, I've shared with you what I feel about your story. You know I like your writing style, it's kind of like reading an actual book (which should be what most writers shoot for...well, except me and my silly drabbles!). This was really good, could use a few touch-ups like that last Channel 4 News report... I've given you some 9's in the ratings because I want to be honest with you, not just give all 10's just because you're my friend, and friends help friends! I'm no expert myself with writing, you already know that. But I had to give a nine for the enjoyment factor because I know next to nothing about RE! Of course this is only my fault, so dont take that personally. Well, that's all I have to say here. I truly do look foreward to reading the rest of this though! Keep it up, Codes! ^_^
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