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| "Harry's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: holy shit!
Reviewed By: aroused On: July 18, 2009 07:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was the best fucking bestiality scene I've ever read. you'd nead a napkin to dry the seat after I was done. :o I mean wow. That was so fucking HOT!! This is going to sound really assumetive..., but would you write me a Harry Potter and Lucius Malfoy Scene? ;} Please, with one of everything good on top. (And by everything good I meant everything sexy)You are the reason why god(or whatever)created fanfiction.*grovels at your feet* That was awsome and you are now my favourite author. I'm a girl by the way and like the way you write. You didn't use any terms that I didn't like sexually and you pretty much mind-fucked anyone who's read this/your that good. I just wanted to say thankyou for your work and it's okay if you don't write that scene. ;) I'm just happy that someone like you is out there writing fanfiction. P.S. do a lot of people ask for fiction and is it annoying? And if so I'm sorry. sozz;& Bye O' LGENDARY AUTHOR! *CRAWLS AWAY ON HANDS AND KNEES BACKWARD. :D I'll look out for more of your stuff.
| Reviewed By: SilverTheScribe On: July 07, 2009 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Bad ass, but you did mix up the words a bit. But over all that was one of the best Fanficts I have read on this site. Please do a follow up piece.
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