Title: ??
Reviewed By: ita1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
um its seems like a good story so far but ut needs lots of work on grammer and organization (like im one to talk :P) and dont let bad reviews get u down just take it as constructive critism or do wut i do cuss them XD
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