| "Control. Infirmity. Defiance." Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: phalon (nsi) On: March 11, 2009 23:25 EDT
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Finally! Great chapter. :D
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Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you have so far, and can't wait to read more! You have a great beginning, creating a divergence at the point where Kikyou died in the manga. And poor InuYasha - can't blame him for being confused. And it looks like Kagome might have given away more of herself than she should have. In any case, I look forward to Sesshomaru entering the picture and to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 18:21 EDT
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believe me, i know how hard it is to come up with an original concept in this genre. it excites me when i find one. by utilizing recombinant personalities in this story, i think you may have just made my day. I love the way that you managed to capture both personalities in you characterizations, and they way that you have given us glimpses of small personality transplants. i can't wait to read more.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 14:41 EDT
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Ooh, very interesting! It seems you are melding Kagome's and Kikyo's characters, so that they become two halves of the same whole, but at the same time - not (if that makes any sense). Kikyo has become more like Kagome, thanks to the latter's sacrifice of soul and strengthening of her inner spiritual barrier, while the latter is dying away, losing herself, and probably wondering if she's made some horrible, impulsive mistake. Considering I kinda know where this is going (I did make icons for you, after all, LOL), this is a very interesting start and one I didn't necessarily expect. I look forward to Sesshoumaru's introduction into the fray, when all of the scenario will be laid out and the boundaries totally known. This has great potential to go places!!
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Reviewed By: Selina MacCloveror [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 13:42 EDT
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Love it so far, girlie!! I love your writing style, and the action is superb! So much confusion regarding Kag/Inu/Kik, but it's so different now...I'm feeling better because of how you have your pairings listed, but still...Kikyou is more like Kagome now? *throws hands up* Like InuYasha needed more reasons to be confused! XD I love this beginning - already major action! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 11:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a intresting start to the story. I can not wait to see the next part.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: March 10, 2009 09:24 EDT
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I don't even know what to say. I guess mesmerized would be a good word for what I'm feeling. I love knowing what the characters are feeling and watching them express those feelings. I also love feeling like I'm right there in the story like a silent bystander (sesshomaruish if you will) It never ceases to amaze me how creative these stories can get. I thought I had heard just about every way that Kagome could be selfless for Inuyasha, but this is a newer one. Soul transferral where the person also obtains attributes of the other. That's pretty creative. I really like your story. Keep up the great work. Thanks
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shivers and smiles* sounds great!! blah.. Kikyo.. >.>
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Title: Here we go~
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 01:11 EDT
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Let's do this thang, baby ^_~
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