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Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2009 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*fans self* Whew, that was one steamy lemon. Heh, gives me ideas on what to do to my husband tonight lol. j/k. Seriously though, very well done, and you still managed to keep Anderson in character. One question remains: Are we done here or is there more? PLEASE LET THERE BE MORE!!! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: DWE On: June 08, 2009 22:14 EDT
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Dear God...that was hot...that was beautiful and so totally in character! Wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2009 18:01 EDT
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Y had to kill a kid, huh? *cries* poor Isabelle! I just hope that doesn't happen to my little Kayleigh. :-P Not bad on the tear jerker. Very nice, if a bit short.
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Reviewed By: socks On: May 07, 2009 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fanfic, its really interesting how you've interprited the characters. Do you plan on continuing it or was Bloodletting the last chapter? I hope not!
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Reviewed By: Bulma Peacecraft [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I was wondering where you had disappeared to!!!!! Remember me from back in the old days when FF.Net was still a good site? Man oh man I kept hoping I'd find you again. And here you are doing a Hellsing story, of all things. Very well written I might add. I can see your writing has improved in the last few years. Nice job. If you ever feel like chatting again, my email is still relena_peacecraft16@hotmail.com. It would be nice to catch up.
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Reviewed By: DWE On: May 06, 2009 17:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Lord, that was hot. This just keeps getting better and better.
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Reviewed By: Graypheonix85 On: April 21, 2009 03:06 EDT
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Hmmm, interesting. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: DWE On: April 19, 2009 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautiful and moving. I really really like it. Please, keep going. You have me hooked.
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Reviewed By: Paladins-Secret-Love On: April 10, 2009 23:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was very in character and I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update the story soon! It's really good!
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Reviewed By: GensoHikki On: April 06, 2009 10:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this chapter. Your writing makes me feel like I'm there watching the whole thing unfold. Good job and can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Paladins-Secret-Love On: March 30, 2009 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good! I am loving the idea of Seras 'Stalking' Anderson. I can't wait to see his reaction from when he realizes just who his stalker is. Please continue this I hope to see and update from you soon.
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Reviewed By: GensoHikki On: March 17, 2009 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I love where this seems to be going. As always, well written and perfect placement of phrases.
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Reviewed By: DWE On: March 16, 2009 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. You have a clear cut and enjoyable writing style and you are bringing an under used coupling to life with it.
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Title: Paladins-Secret-Love
Reviewed By: Jessy_Muse On: March 16, 2009 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have never seen this plot line used before so I am interested to see what will become of this fic. The writing was excellent.
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Reviewed By: GensoHikki On: March 12, 2009 11:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I felt like I was a fly on the wall watching the scenes unfold - you made the story come alive around me, Keep going, this is a great start.
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