| "Lustful Desires" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ravijnem36 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2011 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Need more chapters please, I love the story so much along with the idea. Its so great please write more!! |
Reviewed By: Nick F. On: March 16, 2009 06:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are one of the most talented lemon writers I have ever had a chance to read!! I love how you portray Kagome as a sexual being who crave earthly sensual satisfactions, I mean come on, even pure innocent virgins are entitled to sexual needs, which your Kagome embraces beautifully. The sexy stuff is also super great. The lemons are so hot and the horny, wonderfully sexual creative Inuyasha is the best!! May I request the use of more toys from the future (like the vibrator in 'Passion Fruit') or maybe light role play in your future writings? Keep up the good works!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that they are stuck like that for now... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know If I could handle three perverted Inuyashas...o_O
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Reviewed By: lilyasha On: March 13, 2009 20:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Rather a good read. Nothing against the plot itseld, but I just don't jive with the whole Kagome transformation thing. She accepts IY for who he is and never expects/wants him to change yet in many fan-fics, Kagome often turns hanyou. Oh well. Keep up the good work. I am keen to see where this is going.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... will they cahnge back afterwards though?... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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