| "Team Seven's Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: blueshard9510 On: October 22, 2010 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I personally found this story enticing to read. My only correction would be that sasuke is not reallllllly in love with kagome. Make it a more progressive thing. Also although I love the sakura bashing, because I hate her too,eventually make her a better person, after Kagome trains her or something.
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Reviewed By: yoruyonaka On: March 28, 2009 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so awesome it's to awesome for words!!! finish the next chapter ,like, REALLY soon okay? by the way do u like cookies?
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Reviewed By: valleygoat On: March 21, 2009 13:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it i really like it. i love it when kagome is all powerful. the only thing i didnt like was the different colors used for the people in the second chapter. its hard to read, bad for the eyes. why do that when you still used he said she said. it's more work with the colors. bsides that i really liked it. i look forward to reading more in the future.
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Reviewed By: -SHAA On: March 21, 2009 05:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your storyplot. it's really interesting (: but i bet you can do better with the typos ?
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 11:17 CDT
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I just read your story and I love it. Why did Sango and Miroku become traitors? I am really curious and I would like to see where you are taking this story. Keep up the good work.
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Title: update!!!!
Reviewed By: Shinatamare On: March 14, 2009 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS FIC IS SOOOOOOO GOOD!!! onegai update soon!!! I really love it ^-^ Update soon please!!!
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