| "Returning Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Suna No Ken On: October 27, 2010 13:31 CDT
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DUDE! ITS ALMOST BEEN A YEAR! WRITE A NEW CHAPTER PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: laWaya_aDisi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 23:14 CDT
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man i am so tottaly anjoying ur work. when it comes to the parings i think u should put sasuke with ino simply because u have been using ino a lot and it will keep things simple. its ether that or sakura and, uge, no way. as for kakashy ya put him with anko. thay just make a cute pair. other than that keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 22:52 CDT
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To answer your question: yes,I really did enjoy this chapter. The fight scene I really enjoyed because I have a thing for swords, but I was wondering who erected the barrier? I know that it was either Itachi or Kisume, but which one and how? In addition I was wonder in if you are going to reveal what Kagome saw through Itachi's eyes? I think that would be really interesting to see your spin on it. Please keep up the great work. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2009 19:31 CDT
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Great chapter Kagome getting blown up and Itachi kidnapping her...ack! I really like the 'internal' conversation between kuybi and Naruto. It really adds to what Naruto is going through and I love it when he sees logic. Also, I like the way that your developing Sasuke. It is very similar to how I would imagine his responses if he would have never left Kohona to seek his revenge, but I think that once he knows that Itachi is involved with the taking and injuring of his 'sister' it will be on like Donkey Kong. Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2009 20:47 CDT
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Ohayo! I really liked the back-story that you added. I believe that it will really help the story flow better in the future. I have a question about Kagome's elemental powers though: How can she make all of the plants inside the compound recede back to 'normal' height all at once? Plants are not elements like fire and water so I find it odd. I know that the 2nd has the wood jutsu , which is a combination of water and earth elements, so is Kagome's similar in nature? Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 20:33 CDT
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I like this story..its different. I am not a huge fan of Sakura before the Shippuden series. She's a bit more likable there..not as annoying. I am intrigued about the mission that Kagome was on. Are you going to go into it more in depth? I also like the way that Kagome can make Sasuke and Naruto stop their feud. Its similar to the way she does things in the Inuyasha series, which is a favorite of mine. Ja ne!
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