| "The Unusual Sayain (Revised)" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2011 11:26 EST
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You can't leave it hanging there!!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: sujung18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2010 15:09 EST
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For the love of god!! Please update!!! I love the story so far and I cant wait to find out what happens next!!! By the way, thank you for writing this!! Im new to this site and Im looking forward to reading your other works |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2009 01:28 EST
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I think there is a discrepancy. You say in your new chapter 1 that Zarbon tried to rape her but then later on (right after she goes into heat) you say it was Radditz . I just thought you might want to know.
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: UsakoChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 22:41 EDT
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so far so good! im liking it. keep going. i have read this story before but i like it so much im reading it again..lol! (ps you still have some grammer errors.. but no biggies)
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 21:13 EDT
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Pretty good so far! I can't wait to see more new chapters!
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Title: =]
Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 15:43 EDT
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I like it. There are still some minor spelling and grammatical errors. Nothing big.
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