| "The Diaries of a mad Dog Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
Reviewed By: gwineveve301 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Litte inuyasha...snicker
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Reviewed By: kittypaws182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol this if funny especially the two girls one cup thing i fell of my chair laughing keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 23:41 CDT
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LOL, loved girth patrol, gotta love inuyasha's ignorance sometimes, I always love diary pov stories, and this ones really good too, but I think you might have gone through them getting together to fast, just went directly from not together, together. And "little inuyasha" is so over done, but I still find it funny although my favorite part of that chapter was how blunt you were with "btw, incase you don't no little inuyasha is his penis" that made me laugh for a good 2 minutes, love the title too plz update
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 05:21 CDT
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it was really short... but it was ok... oh and pregnat is spelt pregnant.
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Reviewed By: Rocky road On: April 21, 2009 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Rocky road On: April 02, 2009 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't like reading bold print i really like it cause its funny ^_^ and i seriously cant wait for the next chapter i'm always checking for up dates so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: April 02, 2009 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please just update please!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 31, 2009 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: yo On: March 31, 2009 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
REALLY FUNNY DUDE keep up the good work. i really liked the two girls one cup part. XD
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 17:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
ROFL! The boob reference, and especially the hair was hilarious.
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 28, 2009 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: songo05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
pretty good but i didnt get the "riding sangos jock" thing
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Reviewed By: adalily [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 14:01 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KAGOME_ fan21 On: March 25, 2009 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 25, 2009 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: bloodthirstynekoyokaigirlxd [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol.. i'm glad u got me to read this.. its pretty wicked.. lol thanx for readin my chaps, i updated another one today.. u should update soon.. i wanna keep reading this.. lol
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2009 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I've got to wonder are birth control pills bad for guys???
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 23, 2009 05:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for thanking in one of your characters!! keep up the good work update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 22, 2009 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2009 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
some people my brother knows from China sent him the link for 2 girls one cup and I when into his room to talk to him... that video is gross I couldn't even watch the whole thing.... then my brother goes and watches more videos about people reactions... interesting chapter...
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Reviewed By: adalily [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2009 01:36 CDT
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i couldnt stop laughing when i saw the "hellooooo, Dane Cook" part. i love him!!!
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 18, 2009 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so funny update soon
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Reviewed By: KAGOME_ fan21 On: March 17, 2009 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story update soon.
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: March 16, 2009 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story it will be more funny if inyuasha tried take kagomes pills but she caught his.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2009 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm...Riding sango's jock? o_O
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 23:11 CDT
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1 problem, chapter 1 & 2 are the same thing. I liked it but I didn't get the "riding Sango's jock" part, of course since I'm almost 40 I don't get much of the 'kiddy slang' being used currently.
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Reviewed By: rawhidewolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I actually really like this. The whole diary thing is a really cool idea - keep going with it!
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