"Numbing the Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 04:50 CDT Comment/Review: this was a great story, but i would have loved it to be longer. a few chapters on the passing years and getting youkai to blend in with humans would have been good and a chapter where kagome gets to see her mom, grandpa, and brother would also have been nice.
| Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 20:54 CDT Comment/Review: Take that Inuyasha ya prick lol. Love the story still can't wait till the last chapter.
| Reviewed By: kjpan On: March 24, 2009 13:24 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Freakin awesome! You should cntinue this fic. Include a jealous and angry inuyasha, an over protective and possessive seshoumaru. believe me if u continue with it, it'll be a hit. With your writing style, it'l be widely read.
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