"A Life Forgotton" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: not a member On: April 09, 2009 18:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this could really go somewhere. It seems a little choppy and like it might need a little more detail, but I like the storyline a lot and I think that it could develop into something extensive and noteworthy. Bulma and Vegeta are my favorite, so I'm behind you all the way on this one. Keep going! Thanks.
| Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 20:59 CDT Comment/Review: A little short and jumpy but I'll give it a chance since it seems interesting.
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