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Title: bardocklover
Reviewed By: tHE KING AND I On: May 02, 2013 10:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
listen i want you to make a fic on bardock and bulma romance please and goku to be her son. I BEG YOU. i wouldnt give enjoyment factor highest because i love bardock and bulma together. but i LOVE the interaction between bardock and bulma. |
Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: green integration [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2012 18:19 EDT
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This was pure genius, did you know that? I absolutely loved this and I'm heartbroken that it hasn't been updated in years, seems like you gave up! The chemistry between BV is simply amazing, and I love the portrayal of the cruel wicked vegeta! My only hope is one day you will come back and finish this amazing story! (Ahhh what I wouldn't give seriously it's rare to find a writer with a plot line as amazing as this!) |
Reviewed By: cyberbat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2010 17:33 EST
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How bad of me to not keep up on updates! Well, I'm a big fan of the King and I so I just had to check this out, and I am not disappointed! This story is just going to be full of laughs and I hope they come soon!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls out of her chair laughing* OMG! Barb is in your fic!!! I about pee-ed myself I was laughing so hard when I read that! *drys laughter tears* Ok.. on to the review. I am really liking this fic. I can't wait to see the rest of it. The twist of Kackorot being in love with Bulma is just too good. The writing is nice and flows well. I spotted only a few typos and I think they were only like keyboard slips. Really going well and the idea is just perfect for this pairing! Keep it rolling girl! Wind to your wings, Keth
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Reviewed By: PiccoloIsGreen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2009 08:00 EDT
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Wonderful! I loved Barb and Caprice in it too, very very cool. Keep up the good work! I love your Vegeta!
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 19:28 EDT
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Cute story. Wow i'm happy people are starting to write again. I miss reading good stories of V/B. I wonder whats happens next.
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Title: *flail*
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 18:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore it!! It took you so long to post but it was more than worth the wait! I'd already read part of this, but I still got chills of excitement reading it over again. Caprice is such a vile little thing isn't she? I bet she's going to try and make Bulma's life hell. Long live vindictive bitches! *preens* And she is such an exotic creature too, thanks to your amazing descriptive skills. *pokes gently* update soon please. Don't let any Spaniards whisk you away (for too long)!
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Title: suspense!
Reviewed By: Usakochic On: May 13, 2009 10:11 EDT
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your got another fanatic squealer*yay*.. im so into this story..omg the true kakorotto..comes out! (many thanks) love his persona! I could vision each scene because you give great detail! omg! the scene with caprice and K Vegeta awesome! too bad bulma and vegeta scene hasnt posted yet. please post soon..
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Reviewed By: Me again On: May 12, 2009 19:38 EDT
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Hmmm, half of my review was cut off - here's the missong part... Anyway, lovely chapter, loved our darling Caprice! I've said this before, but you have a very engaging writing style. I thoroughly enjoyed every word! *Thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Someone who can't be bothered to log in... On: May 12, 2009 19:37 EDT
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*SQUEALS* Can I say that I love me in this? (Yeah, it's Barb ^_^) She's just so... ME!! With a bit of Mrs Briefs thrown in!!! *runs around in joy* You know how I adore the sublime Mrs Briefs!!! I do aspire to be more like her.
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Reviewed By: PiccoloIsGreen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 07:25 EDT
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Absolutely wonderful so far! I even joined MM just so I could review for you :) I really can't wait for more, and I love how you put in a little G/B (especially Goku's admission that he shouldn't have married Chi Chi). It's stories like these that get me all excited about being a DBZ fan, so thank you very much!
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Reviewed By: not a member On: March 31, 2009 01:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic spin on a great couple! Please continue this, I think you've got something that's worth expanding. Character development is awesome. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 21:13 EDT
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*Twitch* So, Bulma gets to spend time with both Bardock and Goku... *twitch* That's OK, it's not like that's my dream or anything... :( *twitch* Some people get all the luck >.<
*cracks whip* Get on with ch 3 ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 20:55 EDT
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Very interesting so far. I think it'll be a great fic as it goes on. I can't wait for more.
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Title: Oh the hints!
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2009 18:59 EDT
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I can't believe you hinted at B/G, you know that's my secret hidden guilty pleasure?? I think it's cute that Goku's crushed on her. It makes me feel gooey inside. Can I join the King's harem, by the way?
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