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| "Embrace of a different taste." Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: Wigi
Reviewed By: Wigi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2012 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story feels a little slow, lots of screaming, running, being injured like the last chapter, but overall, I really like the story and would like to see more of it. | Reviewed By: PassingReader On: February 28, 2012 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow. I'm glad you finally updated. It's been almost a year! I had to read it again from the beginning XD Your spelling and grammar has improved a ton since you started. I'm sad it was so short though. | Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 03, 2011 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You, my friend, have somehow wormed your way into the deepest recesses of my mind and pulled out quite a few secretly harbored fantasies. Dark skin, red hair, sexy body and a naga along with an intellectual tech-oriented type. Neither are obviously submissive, so to speak. This story and I were meant to be! XP I honestly feel for poor Harley. That guy is tired, lost, out of sorts and now being beaten up by larger than life snake men. Not to mention the fact that he's never had any experience with the "great outdoors". Though he does pack quite a punch. Wonder why snake-man is going through all the trouble. He's got his work cut out for him. I'm rambling a bit, sorry about that. My, my. I am really looking forward to the next time you update. You'd better not keep us all waiting. I'm pretty sure some people, not me of course, would be shattered if it didn't continue. Well, better be off. Can't wait to see more! | Title: Great
Reviewed By: Wigi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2011 18:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, you left it as a cliff hanger! Lol now i am gonna be wondering and waiting like crazy for the next chapter. Loved it though, can't wait to find out Harley's reaction to the snake man when they can finally talk. It leaves so many questions now, update soon!!!!!! | Title: Dying for more!
Reviewed By: Greenhorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 20:53 EDT
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Love, I really adore this series and can't wait for the next chapter, but you already knew that didn't you? This naga sounds like he's going be quite something once the language barrier is breached... Or will something else be breached first? Anyway I was thinking on the whole design thing - I think you should assign your nagas (assuming there will be more than one) different breeds. In my mind, the one you just introduced has ball python markings. I kinda want to draw him and Harley so let me know when you've figured out his markings.
| Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 00:28 EDT
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What a way to end it, cliff hangers are just pure evil. Oh well this chapter was great like the first finally Harley finished his father and brothers work. At least he can say it works exactly how his father had imagined. Sorry I don't know much about nagas or snakes to help with the description, but i will be waitin for the next installment! Be readin ya.
| Title: Great beginning!
Reviewed By: Quiet Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 19:58 EDT
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To travel from one location to another in seconds, as if opening a door and immediately finding yourself in another country is what I have always wished for. I know that I should be grateful that we have airplanes but in the modern world where living where your parents or childhood friends live is nearly impossible, then the distance becomes annoying at the very least. Harley is young, intelligent, a loving brother and son, and is determined to make the project work. Dr. Clark, hmmm, is he how he is because of jealousy or is he truly concerned about the risks? And Howley he may be trying to redeem himself but he seems to be a shady figure. Both seem harmless but we have yet to see where this goes. I did feel sad about how Harley is unwilling or better said, unable to delegate his work. He'd be better off working for a private company than with the government and its red tape. Great beginning! QS
| Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 18:06 EDT
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Interesting, I wonder where you came up with the idea. I hope it continues.
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