| "The Truth Hurts More" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: 15aTech On: November 18, 2009 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story so far and can't wait to see Gohan put a serious hurt on that fake
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Reviewed By: not a member On: July 04, 2009 01:00 CDT
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Can't wait for your next chapter, I like how this story has developed thus far. It will be wonderful to see Gohan knock Satan on his ass... lol I'm excited. Keep it up, good work!
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 18:35 CDT
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another awsome chappie keep up with the excellent work
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 15:23 CDT
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I really like this fic. Sometimes you need a non-hardcore fic to read and this fits the bill. I hope Gohan doesn't rape Videl. :(
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Reviewed By: WolfYoukaiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You're story has officially become a favorite for me! I absolutely adore Bardock! I love that you've got him in this, no one ever puts him in anything, and they usually go for the whole 'scientist' thing, which is annoying... I'm so excited for the next update! Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 20:23 CDT
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This is a great startofa fan fic and keep up with the great work.
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Reviewed By: aquila333(no_login) On: April 22, 2009 17:23 CDT
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no, you cant leave it there! what happens to bardock?! Goku's gonna be ecstatic meeting his father. and it seems that gohan is taking a while to heal, or does the sayian healing factor not work on their tail? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: WolfYoukaiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love your story, it's hard to find well done Gohan/Videl, and you're doing such a great job. I can't wait to see what happens next, and how Vegeta will train Gohan. ^^
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Reviewed By: aquila333 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story! Gohan is so fun to torture ;) the plot is coming along nicely and i cant wait for it to develop. please don't wait too long to update! i want to see what Videl does to poor Gohan, and how she reacts to his tail.
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