| "Magic of Shikon High" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2010 15:00 CDT
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That was really cute! Update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2010 17:39 CDT
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Wow, you're a busy person! Good update, but It's kind of hard to tell when people are talking, and who is tallking, without punctuation. Love the story! Keep updating please! (Not a flame- just advice)
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2010 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 15:39 CST
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Please let Inuyasha forgive her!!!! And Kikyo totally got what she deserved!
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow i love this story keep going and update soon. I cant wait for more so update soon!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 04:07 CST
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It had better not be another year. If it I wake you up again. :P Fantastic only criticism I have is Inuyasha saw her go slightly mad you need to add a little more angst about that. In real life my own boyfriend would walk on eggshells for about three days. like little texting hardly any cuddling and definitely no kissing. Plus you already started making Kagome an angsty character. You need to torment her a little. And maybe goop a little more mushy-gushiness on Sango and Miroku. Well anyway I hope you think about it. And I difinitely look forward to the next chapie. *huggles*~Ms. Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Inulover21901 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow im hooked keep it going hope Inu-chan gets hooked up with kags soon
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Reviewed By: Inulover21901 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow im hooked keep it going hope Inu-chan gets hooked up with kags soon
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2010 03:21 CST
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good update. keep it up. :) ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2010 02:07 CST
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Where's the new chapie? It's been almost a year since the last one. Please update. ~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nine times out of ten you are doing the same Maths (Australian English) work so unless one class is running late (or has a lot of holidays when they are scheduled to have that class. they should all be relatively the same... (because the teachers for a subject and year are meant to collaborate) Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: kyonkichi-luver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 16:15 CDT
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You're off to a good start. I'm a sucker for Inu high school fics so yours immediately caught my attention. hope you update soon! ^^
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