"A Hot, Steamy Shower" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Cellar_Door [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2009 23:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really enjoyed that, the detail was exquisite but not too over bearing.
| Reviewed By: df On: April 02, 2009 23:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I feel guilty for not noticing this posted until now. But I'm here to review and let you know that I enjoyed reading this. The last part is something I could picture Vegeta saying. Lol. At the end, you put this was originally part of your other story, AP:V2; does that mean you won't be continuing it? I hope you don't give up writing it. I've enjoyed the posted chapters thus far, it's creative and unique. I would love to read more, but if for whatever reason it's discontinued, I completely understand and thank you for sharing.
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