| "You're Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: you're mine
Reviewed By: samanthas On: March 11, 2012 16:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really loved this story,thank you for posting this! i just have a question you said naruto mostly made sasuke wore female uniform to school right? isn't naruto worried that sasuke might get harassed,on the way home from street? wearing girls uniform and a thong under the skirt? and sasuke is still a "boy" is it ok.for him to be wearing that on school? on his own mind. also won't you please make a another chapter pls. pls .pls. i loved your lemon it is so super.and since naruto is using camera to picture to sasuke,maybe this time naruto cold use a video recording camera insted,so he ahve sasuke in motion with sound and effects and all.for his pleasure viewing? maybe... i hope so. tnx again for the story. your one of my favourite author. |
Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2009 18:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. Now if only i could write like that. *sigh* I really like your writing style.
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Reviewed By: meshalax On: April 08, 2009 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic but next time try seperating your fic into paragraphs, its hard to read a fic when it looks like one big running sentence, it also takes some of the fun out of it and makes reading it almost like a chore. Edit and overall rating 8 and 1/2
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Reviewed By: kibaluv53 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 09:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE FANFIC!!!!!!!
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