| "Primitive Instincts" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 08:31 CDT
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That was a really good story. I'm glad I was able to read it. Thank you so much and I hope to see more like this soon.
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Reviewed By: Strawberrychan1_Ichigochan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter lov it through it seemed kinda short and all but hey that just me are thinkinh of some sort of sequel for this story because it seems kinda cut off
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Title: Story
Reviewed By: Strawberrychan1_Ichigochan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is just plain awesome, along with your grammar and spelling too. just Lov the whole story and plotline overall plzs update soon
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 20:43 CDT
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Aww, that was so sweet! I glad they made it out ok. Sorry Shino...
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Reviewed By: Cross Beauman [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 20:41 CDT
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OK here ya go. I love ur fanfic. It's interesting. And it's one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 22:09 CDT
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Oooo, LOL! Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: FullMetalChick1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...pretty good...I really like how you took the concept of Naruto being able to change into the Kyuubi and applied it to the other characters...really made for a fun and interesting story...can't wait to read more! ^_-
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 10:06 CDT
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Very interesting. So Naruto has a brother and the majority of characters are all 1/2lings...interesting. I like what I have seen of the personality of Sasuke and the others. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 21:51 CDT
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Oh that was so sad! I was so about to cry! Don't scare me like that! JK. It goes great with the story. Hello mystery fox, who might you be? I'm sorry, I'm kind of hyper today. Great job with these chapters. Can't wait for another one.
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Reviewed By: KuroKarasu0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are awesome! I love this idea and the way you portray sasuke and naruto.the plot is well thought out and o so enjoyable you left wanting more, please update soon! Lovely fic :D
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 23:16 CDT
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I really like this story. You made it really interesting and the set up for it is wonderful. Naruto is so cute, makes me want a fox. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: :D On: April 12, 2009 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far please keep writing :D.
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Reviewed By: Mira_Hakuta On: April 11, 2009 23:48 CDT
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Yay!~ I really enjoy this. Please write more!~
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Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: April 05, 2009 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So cute,but I feel sorry for Naru, please continue soon~
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Title: Don't leave me hanging
Reviewed By: Vegetas4Life06 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This pretty awesome so far. Poor naru getting abused. Please write more its not fair you left people hanging, it was getting really good. I love Mean/protective sasuke. I would like to know more about sasuke's little pack and the interesting relationship between wolf and fox. Please write more.
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