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| "Naruto: Kuroekidaishi" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: More
Reviewed By: NaruHinaWillHappen On: September 12, 2010 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to read more because this story is intresting!I don't know what you mean by "I'm stuck by 4 women" but I would like the Future couple to be NaruHina,because (1) Masashi Kishimoto said it will happen in the series and Hinata always loved Naruto since the day she first saw him (Naruto Shippuden:Confessions,166).And Please don't make NaruSaku because Sakura always beats the c**p out of Naruto and would always blam him for something she did and Sakura just has a nasty personality most of the time,she seems if she PMS's every day of the years.Hinata deserves Naruto then any other girl in Naruto.Hinata is nice,gentle complete opposite of Sakura,sure she is shy but thats her nature,and one more thing,Hinata did confess her love without fainting and she did risk her life to save Naruto!So please please have NaruHina happen!!!(No offense on what I said about Sakura,Sakura fans)
| Reviewed By: Crimson Reaver On: April 08, 2009 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not exactaly what I would call original but in this case I think it's a good thing. I've been reading a lot of stories lately that are a little off the wall. So this is a nice change of pace. Please update soon.
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