Reviewed By: cadma On: July 24, 2009 07:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I give u all 10. I really loved your story, really detailed, great actually. It's an interesting point of view to introduce a "girlfriend" for L. But what I liked most was the plot, the way you wrote things and how they evolved. You really know how to keep the atmosphere. Well, that's it from me. I hope I'll see another chapter sometime soon.
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