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Title: kjpan
Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
that is like so cliche
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 03:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
This should be an AU. Kagome's married to inuyasha and messing around with another man while married to another would get her killed. There's a law still in effect in japan that you will get the death penility if your cheating on your husband or wife( As far as my aunt knows). Kagome would be a whore in their eyes and either be stoned to death or hung. Even sesshoumaru would frown upon kagome for that. Maybe if the well never opend and inuyasha died...and sessh and kagome meets again in the future it would work. No kikyo no naraku no inuyasha. You can make up a new villain to fight.
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Reviewed By: Kittenkit On: April 07, 2009 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going on your writing. You are already off to a good start, so keep up the work. By the way my mediaminer member name is Kittenyoukai so you'll see me around alot.
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