| "The Miko and the Taiyoukai" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god. that sounds so horrible, I wish people didn't have to go threw with those things. I'm glad that you have your boyfriend, at least some thing is happening right in your life... at least because they know that you have hard the brain surgery they will keep you in the hospital because of that. The new chapter was very good. Sango just blurts it out even thought she promised!!! lol.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 00:21 CDT
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Makes me wonder if inuyasha busted a hole in her crotch...kikyo's just a clay doll.She has no need for food (she uses souls to keep her alive) and she was only made for finding jewel shards for that witch that brought her back. she has no orgins at all. she has no sex orgins either. Remember when naraku attacked kikyo when inuyasha thougt kikyo was dead? Did you notice there was no blood and she broke like she was made of clay? Well that's all she is just clay and souls that she stole. Clay dolls can't have sex at all. And the kikyo/inu scene was very disgusting...please dont write another lemon between those two..yuck!
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 15:03 CDT
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whats wrong wid ur brain?
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Reviewed By: Kittenkit On: April 18, 2009 08:59 CDT
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Great update yet again
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Reviewed By: kace19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 01:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Kittenkit On: April 17, 2009 19:05 CDT
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That was a quick update but thanks again
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 11:27 CDT
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i like ur story but u need to make a few changes. and thts really sweet of u to say tht i took the time out. plus dont spend all ur time writng. it mite afect ur schhol life. divide ur time. an hour at nite
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Reviewed By: Kittenkit On: April 13, 2009 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay update I feel special and to thank your reviewers just send them a shout out over you fic chapter I'm sure they will get the message.
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Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 19:11 CDT
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I'm so glad u updated, and I agree that inuyasha and kikyo being intimate was super gross. But I really don't like kikyo anyway. Anyway, hope u keep writing and I await ur next update :)
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Reviewed By: house bunny On: April 13, 2009 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like tyhe story but the inyuasha and kikyo doing it is just nasty i mean she's dead. So please don't put that in a character ever again ok.
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Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! Love this story!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol!! I'm so sorry! I reviewed the wrong story! That goes to show you there is too many sesh/kag fics. I'm usually on fanfiction...so I can cut all the weird pairings out. Your story is well...not very original. Like I said I only like Sessh/kag pairings in an AU that has nothing to do with the manga unlees inuyasha died. The manga has ended. So you gotta read it! Don't stop writing though. Although I don't mind Koga/kagome pairings. I guess It's because I like him. ^_^
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 13:26 CDT
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that is like so cliche
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 03:08 CDT
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This should be an AU. Kagome's married to inuyasha and messing around with another man while married to another would get her killed. There's a law still in effect in japan that you will get the death penility if your cheating on your husband or wife( As far as my aunt knows). Kagome would be a whore in their eyes and either be stoned to death or hung. Even sesshoumaru would frown upon kagome for that. Maybe if the well never opend and inuyasha died...and sessh and kagome meets again in the future it would work. No kikyo no naraku no inuyasha. You can make up a new villain to fight.
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Reviewed By: Kittenkit On: April 07, 2009 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going on your writing. You are already off to a good start, so keep up the work. By the way my mediaminer member name is Kittenyoukai so you'll see me around alot.
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