"Irresistible Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Goshibuh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 21:39 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Personally, I think you should add chapters. Maybe not necessarily make it into a story if that's not something you want to do, but a mini one sounds good. I really hope you take my advice.
| Reviewed By: neverest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 20:48 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it was sexy, brilliantly creative, and definantly original. awesome!
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