| "My Succubus Girlfriend" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Kagome has the responsibility of producing the entire next generation of succubus??? lol... great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome & inuyasha's situation is quite complicated... at least they talked and hopefully their relationship will change... interesting talk kagome had with her mother... what role will miroku have with that book he has?... looks like sango is an enemy... who was that person in the end of the chapter that went in disguise?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 12:20 EDT
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hehe Inuyasha is so awkwardly cute. Sango seems very intense right now, so I'm curious where her character is going. I hope Kagome and Inuyasha will be ok. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: HentaiSouljaShoujo On: April 12, 2009 21:28 EDT
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Hey ! This is a wonderful story so far!! But I gotta ask a question or two did you get the succubus thing from an anime/manga from Rosario Vampire or are you just interested in monsters ? And if so where do you find books like that ? Well that was all I wanted to say bye
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Reviewed By: S On: April 11, 2009 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story so far!!!!
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Reviewed By: JBird7986 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 19:39 EDT
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I've really enjoyed this story so far. I don't usually leave reviews, I like to be more of an observer than a commentator, but I'd just like to point something out. I think it might be a bit more interesting if you put their relationship into a state of symbiosis. Kagome's relationship with Inuyasha seems almost parasitic at this point. She's effectively in control of this situation and Inuyasha just seems to be along for the ride. Sure she can furnish him with magic and protect him (I'm assuming) from danger, but that seems to be in her best interest, as a means of protecting her source of energy. Additionally, it's in her interest to cook for him, as that serves to replenish his energy, which he needs to furnish her. All we've seen her do so far really is live off him without conferring any major benefit to him. She's used his knowledge to learn for herself, and though he's not getting a bad deal via the pleasure that comes from Kagome feeding off of him, he's not really receiving any true benefit from this arrangement either. I know that he's effectively an energy factory for her, but it seems to me that he wouldn't want to continue this arrangement with her in the long term, as there seems to be very little in it for him (except for giving up his strength) once the necklace can come off. Thus, I'm suggesting that maybe Kagome should be providing something back to Inuyasha to make the situation more worth his while. It seems unfair to let her have all the fun. Additionally, I just want to say (and this is meant to be lighthearted) that you're one mean person for making her the woman of his dreams and then making him promise her not to have sex with her. I assume that this would result in a detrimental situation (such as his death), which is why she's so against him having sex with her. Either way, that's cold. :) I'm looking forward to continuing to read this story as it progresses. Know that I'll be here, even if you don't hear from me.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 10:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter I love this line : Then again, she said she manifested her body from my thoughts so it's no wonder she doesn't look evil. but this one sound VERY weird... : "Nothing about my body is pure anymore Father. You know that." that's what I get from being the minority (female) in It (Uni student)
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 02:03 EDT
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oooh creepy. I really like the unique perspective of this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know I use that on my brothers lap top (before he killed it)!!! but now I have my lap top I haven't used it...
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 03:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story's concept. I've always wanted to read a story where Kagome was the sexy one for a change, instead of her freaking out at InuYasha's pervertedness (not to mention she's the demon this time). Haha. I'm really curious about what will happen next. ;)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!!! you made one spelling mistake or Microsoft word changed it to a different word : This was his last change. I think you mean chance!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 18:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! Kagome's late introduction had me cracking up. I'm really interested to see where this goes. It looks really funny. :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Rocky road On: April 09, 2009 01:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story already! =) I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 16:47 EDT
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I really liked the story so far! I haven't read an inu/kag fc with the concept before. Update soon please^_^
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