| "The Tangled Threads of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: i like the story On: July 05, 2009 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE continue updating i really want to see kouga die (maybe).....wait will he die? anyways GREAT story!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2009 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well....Dang...there has to be some way to get her away from koga. Maybe Inuyasha was raised by the bandits? He could kidnap her. Great story!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...If koga is that evil why couldn't she run away or at least fake her death.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks pretty good so far. You might want to make your chapters longer. Lol! I like long chapters. But if you cant make them longer that's okay. ^_^
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