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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Emzzz On: May 30, 2009 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I fail my exam on Monday it is all your fault! I could not help but read this whole story in one sitting, totaling about 4 hours meant for revising. I love angst genre for inuyasha, and this has to have been the best I have read so far. The amount of times my heart clenches when reading this shows me how much I get into this storyline; you nearly become one with the characters themselves. Wonderful, wonderful WONDERFUL . Please continue writing, I look forward to seeing how the story progresses. Once again, excellent job!
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2009 01:50 CDT
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Whoot! Read and caught up, and I must say... I thoroughly enjoied it... Adding to favorites as soon as I've posted this... Hurry and update!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2009 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I glad to see that she's finally starting to heal the wounds in her soul that naraku placed there. I would be fitting if kagome killed him...after all he did the most damage to kagome.
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Reviewed By: luvininu28 On: April 30, 2009 12:35 CDT
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There are few stories that ever actually make me feel how the characters are feeling. Your story has joined those few. I am amazed at the depth and range of feelings. I was silently crying during several of your chapters staring in disbelief as I read and the feelings of insecurity,self-loathing, and sorrow consumed me so much that I was literally feeling pain. Thank you for writing a story that can bring such a strong reaction. The moments of joy, hope, and boundless love enveloped me as well, and I'm so glad that you've shared such a strong lesson of inner strength and the power of love and support through your writing. Thanks again!! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So naraku is hiding behind bushes gigling eviley? Naraku is a loser and I hope inuyasha serves him his ass on a platter. Let kikyo stay alive for awile...I like her. I like it when kikyo is a good character. Lol! Just dont turn this into an Inu/kik fic.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was intense! This may very well destroy inuyasha mentally. Poor kagome...Inuyasha needs to stay strong for her. I hope she wakes up.
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 20:30 CDT
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this chapter was the most emotional so far. Your descriptions were amazing, especially with how Inuyasha was feeling. I'll be anxiously waiting on how Kagome will deal with this when she wakes up. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 16:03 CDT
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ah! i just finished reading your latest uodate! clifffhanger! complete it complete it!
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 15:48 CDT
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i love it. i love it. ilove it. U had better complete this story. i love it and i love you. aawesome story. awesome use of english. everythings awesome. i even cried while reading it. its emotional nd deep and you have to finish it quickly!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooo! Not another chliffhanger....so she has to relive her rape again,To show inuyasha what happened?
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 11:41 CDT
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Ahhhh what an intense cliff hanger. I really liked that you updated so soon and I love how you descurbe the emotions. Keep up the awesome work! :)
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhh! I want more!! Lol! Did you have to end it there? Now I really want to know what happens next. I hope Inuyasha doesn't go all full demon on kagome. He might try to mate her...wich would very,very bad. I'm crossing my fingers for a happy ending for Inuyasha and kagome. And i actually LIKE kikyo in this fic. She's so nice. Lol! I still dont want her with inuyasha. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 22:34 CDT
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aww this story is really depressing but also has an air of hope. I really like the way you describe the emotions and the way everyone deals with it. I feel like it's very realistic. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: Sorry for the doublepost
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 01:56 CDT
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Lol! I meant he did not rape kagome not kikyo. Lol! It's 2:54 in the morning...I better get to bed. Goodnight! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story! I just hope kagome will begin healing soon. She needs to talk to SOMEONE. Not sango...there are three people she could talk to miroku, kikyo or Inuyasha. I would choose Inuyasha they both need to understand that even if inuyasha WAS there she would still have been raped. Although Inuyasha should not have ran off to find kikyo for what 6 days? He did not rape kikyo naraku did. I'm very glad to see kikyo trying to help kagome. It'll take a while before they can umm...fully mate. God knows kagome isn't ready for sex not after being violently raped. I'm happy there was no bashing of the main characters. Now all we need is a happy ending. Kagome and Inuyasha deserves it.
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