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Title: Pulchritudinous
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reading this absolutely astounding fic, at the same time I am listening to Lara Fabiens' "You're Not From Here"; this paticular song makes this fic so so much darker. I will give you my complete thoughts on this once I've read the next chapter. FYI... I never thought in a million years that anyone could make it so Naraku plays such a dominant role in this fic. I love it!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 19:54 CST
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This is a very interesting story and well written. I'm glad that Inuyasha finally got some revenge. You're portrayal of Kagome's feelings toward herself after the rape is spot on. I'm glad they are working it out. And, I'm so glad that you aren't bashing Kikyou. You're doing a great job with the characters. Thanks for posting! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mc61 On: December 06, 2009 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi Amber, wanted to let you know I really enjoy your stories. I believe I have read all of them so far. They are very good, and keep me on the tip of my seat all the time. I am alway checking to see if you have updated. Malice is awsome. So is Trust me in death, Broken Fates is heart wrenching. You really are a tallented writer. I believe I have read all of then. Your Hentai stories were fun. I look forward to your updates. I am sorry to hear you will be updating less often and hope all is well with you and your family. I will continue to check for updates to your stories. After all I need to find out what happens! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2009 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a nicely written chapter. The word flow was very good, easy to see the pictures in the mind. Just enough description that you can picture it or not as per readers choice. Very well done.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2009 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol!You let Jakotsu go first! Lol! You know what they say: Revenge is a dish best served cold. And BOY did naraku get it!! Happy halloween! ^_^
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Title: Walking the Line
Reviewed By: Sutlesarcasm, Not Signed In On: October 29, 2009 12:53 CDT
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Oh-ho Kanna/Amber, I'd say you walked the line between descriptive and nondescriptive perfectly, AND you let Jakotsu go first. I hope I never piss you off at me. Your mind works too well at coming up with the perfect revenge. I can just imagine Inu trolling the depths of he** for souls that want revenge on Naraku. He deserves a double ear scratch for this one, and so do you. Just for a moment I was reminded of Mae West..."When I'm good, I'm very, very good....but when I'm bad, I'm better!"
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2009 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so Inuyasha is going to do something really bad to naraku...he isn't fixin on raping and torturing him is he? Inu raping naraku is...ewww. But torture? Torture is perfectly fine with me. But make sure naraku loses the little friend that lives in his pants..er..kimono...well you know what I mean. I'm sticking with this story till the end. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Naraku is a sick twisted basterd!! I love this story so much! I just hope they finally one up him.
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2009 21:48 CDT
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i loved it!! this gets better with every chapter you post! i seriously am like your biggest fan!
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2009 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God! you are beyond amazing! this is such an amazing fic! usually i cant stand Angst but i still gave this fic a shot and i am really happy that i did! i read all the chapters in one day and i am dying to know what happens next. i have read almost all of your other fics and they are all amazing. but i must say this is one of my favorites! (the other one is the Fuyu series) wonderful! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm....I wonder who left that binder on kagomes doorstep.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! I hope naraku is in soooo much pain. To bad she didn't kill him. But then the story would be over wouldn't it? This is one of my most favorite fanfics! And I hope you continue to write it.^_^
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 17:51 CDT
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Lol! Sorry I had to reread it. For some reason I got confused...I'll add it up to a brain fart.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait..so sessh has a thing for kagome? Please don't let this turn into a sessh/kag fic!
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 00:43 CDT
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I'm so glad you updated a chapter, and how all the characters are developing. It's very interesting and I love the way you describe their emotions. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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