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| "So Far Away" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: breaker On: July 24, 2010 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i honestly loved your story and i thought i was so creative and different from most 1x2 stories that I've read.I have a question though cassy is trying to get rahne and the surrogate children back so that she can get some money? for some reason that part confused me. Plus didn't she believe that duo was broke since he gave up his money so what is her reason for trying to get rahne?
| Reviewed By: angeredcrow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fic so far! Keep writing, I want to know what happens next. And Lemon! I NEED LEMONY GOODNESS! sincerely, Sian a.k.a. Duosbabymama
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