Reviewed By: no one special On: June 17, 2009 22:59 CDT Comment/Review: Painful to read. If this was a serious attempt, try to read more stories before writing one. It might help you get more of a style. Or get a friend to read it before posting. The standards here are a bit higher.
Title: a 2 year old can write better then you using its ass Reviewed By: unimpressed On: April 22, 2009 13:17 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review: well... that was... lame pity the rating system doesn't give a minus option