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"Bits From The Big Yellow Bag" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ]
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 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 30, 2009 18:24 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Really interesting doing a piece from Mayu's perspective! I liked! :D ~Amber
 Reviewed By: phalon (nsi)  On: July 20, 2009 16:36 EDT
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Such a wise hanyou. XD He's learning... Slowly but at least he gets it. Great job on this one-shot, it amused me greatly.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2009 14:18 EDT
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"I keep my mouth shut so she don't stick dirt there, bouzu," InuYasha explained. "I suggest you do the same for a few days." ♣ one would wonder that miroku couldn't see the pattern-- just like inuyasha transformed on moonless nights, surely there would be an indicator that the girls were unusually more moody on certain phases of the moon too. loved the subtle hint without saying anything. i'm all for self preservation. LOL ♦ delighted, ginny ♥
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 20, 2009 10:28 EDT
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naraku's control was almost complete-- to block all familial memory the boy had, punishing him by allowing the worst few to bleed through. but he didn't account for emotions of the heart. really, the sango/kohaku story was the most tragic.-- your portrayal was quite beautiful. ♥;
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2009 04:09 EDT
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great portrayal and explanation!! it is too coincidental that he hadn't bothered killing him when he surely was the better fighter. i like the way you think! ♣ and for s#*+s and giggles: youtube.com/watch?v=RFO6ZhUW38w ♥ delighted, ginny
 Title: Moving On
Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi)  On: May 07, 2009 04:58 EDT
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Well dang,I wish I knew who the guy was that was taking Kikyo away.... Renji perhaps? This would be a cool story to go on further with. :) Wonderful job.
 Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi)  On: May 07, 2009 04:54 EDT
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Oh I remember that last chapter of Inuyasha. :) I like how you wrote that piece. :)
 Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi)  On: May 07, 2009 04:51 EDT
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Great drabble, want to hug Yasha.
 Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi)  On: May 07, 2009 04:49 EDT
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Ah, the power of the slinky. XD Figures that would get out into the world. Of course Shippo going by his nature would do his best to get ahold of something that moves beyond reasoning. Another great story of the bag.
 Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi)  On: May 07, 2009 04:46 EDT
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Haha! Poor Kags, craving Ramen. It'd be funny if she ended up having a girl that wanted nothing but ramen. :P Great job.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 06, 2009 21:17 EDT
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*points to author* i reviewed this on lj! ♠ one has to ask-- who did he charge for kikyou's wheel? ♣ still loving how you tied the two. there are a striking similarity between the appearance of all her characters =D ♥
 Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 19, 2009 04:26 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love them :D funny!
 Title: everything in their power
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 19, 2009 00:55 EDT
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one could imagine him making such efforts so that his and kagome's marriage would be accepted by the village. nicely done. ♥
 Title: coiled energy
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 19, 2009 00:20 EDT
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the slinky never lasted long. someone who was too young would always get their hands on them and pulled them apart, tied them in knots. funny kirara got it, i guess she saw easy prey and just pounced. ♥
 Title: cravings
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 19, 2009 00:14 EDT
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i think i had stronger cravings when i used to smoke pot than when i was pregnant. that was great! funny last line --now to find some cattle (i would opt for venison). ♥
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