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 Title: Chap 28
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 11, 2011 20:57 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru and Kikyou? That's a pairing you don't see every day, but as I roll it around in my head for a second I can't think of any complaints. It's really a win/win every way you look at it. Those two both get somebody to be happy - or at least 'complemented' - with, while Kagome and Inuyasha are presumably freed to be together without issue. Nicely done! Inspired by an art piece? I'll have to go check that out...
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 02, 2011 18:51 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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WTF...? Like Power Rangers? LOL! I agree with kokoronagomu, somebody has got to draw that - the end pose, just as you described it. That would be awesomely hilarious! Hilariously awesome! As was the mental image you already painted from the description alone, LOL, especially with Inuyasha's thoughts at the end there.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 02, 2011 10:59 EDT
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i still get the insane giggles imagining them in spandex --it's like the best image in my mind -- someone has got to draw that!! ♥loves you!!♥
 Title: Without You
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 06, 2010 13:55 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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*sniffle*... I don't like sad endings, though we all know the world can't always be rainbows and gumdrops. That's why I prefer the 'happily ever after' of the fantasy world. That being said, this short was really well done - a realistic ending befitting of the harsh truths of reality. Good job! Keep it up!
 Title: Nonsense
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 21, 2010 11:56 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Didn't Rumiko actually admit in an interview at some point that, at least initially, she had no idea where she was going with the Inuyasha story when she started it? LOL, I too couldn't help but notice how Kagome managed to pierce the jewel cleanly with her arrow at the end there, yet it was that exact same thing, hitting the jewel with an arrow, that shattered it in the first place. I chalk it up to her level of experience as a miko, knowing what she's doing versus not having a clue, and also let's not forget she was using the bow from Mt. Azusa the second time, which has spiritual powers of its own. If her arrow can pass through solid mass in order to strike the object (or person) that's behind something else, then piercing the jewel without shattering it suddenly doesn't seem so unreasonable. Just...ya know...don't think about the whole time paradox Rumiko created by having that one shard that supposedly made it through all 500 years in the forehead of that Noh mask, and I think other than that the story keeps it together pretty well! LOL
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 21, 2010 11:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
my sentiments exactly -_- LOL
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2010 13:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
yep! ♥ ټ
 Title: First and Foremost
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2010 02:11 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think I am forced to disagree with Inuyasha as well, and agree with Miroku. Well done!
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 17, 2010 12:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
even after reading this at lj, i'm still laughing. =D
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 30, 2010 09:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
a different -profound- perspective and very insightful --an ulterior motive in insisting on going home for school. i had never considered that she's giving them needed breaks and rest at her insistence. i had always weighed the importance of kagome's school to the saving of the world-- instead of seeing that having rested and refreshed fighters is better for morale and ultimately success. -- *lightbulb turned on in my head* ♥
 Title: Acceptance...
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 05, 2010 19:16 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really, really like this piece. It's the things left unsaid that say so much. It's obvious what's happened here, but hopefully after the tears have dried, Inuyasha and Kagome can find their own "Will & Grace" type of happiness together. They are friends, after all, and friends are there for each other.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 17, 2009 05:25 EST
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jii-chan-- the consummate opportunist. ♥
 Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 20, 2009 20:16 EST
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Oh I love the slinky story!!
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 06, 2009 00:03 EST
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i'm not sure i reviewed this on lj, but another won't hurt-- will it? ♣ one could only imagine how painful and infuriating that would be for someone who was entirely going to forsake a large part of himself so that he could be with her until naraku's interference. ♦ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=stuyVj8IOPg ♦ then again, with his history he could very well have felt that it was too good to be true, and was only biding his time until it all blew up in his face-- making naraku's scheme work that much better. ♥;
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2009 01:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
so sad... i was there with a friend when she miscarried twins in her first trimester, she called me- she was devastated. ♣ one thing though~ when kagome powers her hama no ya her whole body, the bow, and the arrow glows with her reiki. when they were fighting the thunder brothers, shippou became her bow and wasn't affected at all by her reiki, and it would have been surrounding him, touching him. one would think that her powers will not hurt anyone she didn't want them to hurt. ♠ apart from that-- this was very emotionally moving. you portrayed the grief and self blame stunningly. ~thank you, ginny ♥
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