| "The Final Decision" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: UPDATES!!!
Reviewed By: HOPEFULL On: August 29, 2011 01:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
U MUST UPDATE!!! This is the best story yet and u HAVE TO CONTINUE IT!!!! please im begging u. FINISH IT! because this story needs an ending! |
Reviewed By: Deonica On: June 03, 2010 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating and thank you for fixing the spacing problem in the first two chapters. It was driving me bonkers! Love it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sestra On: August 04, 2009 12:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm truly looking forward to seeing how you develop this story, especially as you are now beginning to stamp your own take on each character's personality instead of relying on Kira's interpretation. I will be interested to see how you bring Iason and Riki together again after they have had their memories wiped. And also to see what devious scheme Jupiter has up her electronic sleeve! It is also quite refreshing to see such a well written and gramatically correct work - although there are one or two dubious uses of words!! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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Title: krane
Reviewed By: krane [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2009 15:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter, thank you for update.
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Title: tamingriki
Reviewed By: TamingRiki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 05:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
I have Tamingriki Vol. 1 Parts 1&2. Tell me what you need in order to continue your story. My email is nllbrbr@yahoo.com Want you to continue this story and will try and help you as much as possible.
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Reviewed By: krane On: April 25, 2009 12:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: sejina On: April 23, 2009 11:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
first of all,i think its a great storie. and u asked for a place to read taming riki chapters, found 1 place, up to chapter 40, http://www.fos-ff.net/browse.php?type=categories&id=193. hope that will help, good luck :)
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