Reviewed By: CassPwnsYou On: May 26, 2009 00:21 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: This was nice to read, but there are tons of these stories out there. Try taking one of the less developed characters and making it like your own.
Reviewed By:rushie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 14:01 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review: I like the plot of your story but it is not original. I have heard this story before but it would be nice to give a little twist at the end of story. Overall it makes me what to read more.
