| "Reunion" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: dennisud
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2010 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what a gripping and dramatic story that dramatically shows how modern society can be interpreted in fiction well and to rove a point. The only thing I think missing is how Keitaro, Sarah and the new baby live with all the emotional baggage plus how the residents react as well! dennisud
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Reviewed By: t0k0 On: November 27, 2009 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an exceptional fic. i've never read one that chilled me as deeply as this one did. may you one day come clean. and myself as well.
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Title: praise
Reviewed By: psychopath [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2009 13:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Despite my loath of rape this is a very well done fic and i would like to read more of your work with "Love Hina" not necesserily in this kind of context but maybe with some interactions with the girls and how they may have had a much darker background then they ever portrayed in the series but over all i would have to say you are one of the better writers i have read. Please for the sake of fanfiction everywhere keep up writing stories that are as compelling as this one cause we all know there are far too many that fall short of the mark.
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Reviewed By: Megatyrant On: May 04, 2009 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very well-written piece, this one. The content, well... creepy. Catherine... Eww, I don't really want ot think about it if I can avoid it. Yuck. I'm not sure that you're the only one who needs some bleach. :P Megatyrant out.
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Reviewed By: andrew baird On: April 29, 2009 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well.....as ever, the quality of your prose is considerable; your pacing is bang on as per usual, and the story was....well thought out, and made for a well crafted piece. the subject matter though...i agree with you. your still better than several authors ive come across, whove actually enjoyed writing this kinda stuff. if you dislike it so much though id suggest sticking to more comfortable territory
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Reviewed By: HolyKnight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Creepy as hell....mindblowing....and a hit....
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