| "A Killer's Heart and Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Title: 5 years
Reviewed By: Shadow Nite [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
For someone who started working on the next chapter right away you sure are taking a long time to post it! Please don't give up on this fic and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: midnight swan On: July 11, 2004 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(heart) I need MORE!!!! When i saw when u wrote the last chapter, i wuz like "nooooo, it can't be TWO WHOLE YEARS ago!!" this fic can't die!!! pleeeeaase, write more to it, it wuz just getting to the best part! and i love killua's angsty moments, and how gon alwayz comes to the rescue! *sob* update your fic, plz...
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Reviewed By: BloodRaevynn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, this is good. I want more. The characterization is totally believable, and did I mention that I want more? It's Ganbatte, not Gonbate. And I believe the "-te" form of miru is mite, not mitte. ::checks "Learn Japanese New College Text Volume II":: Yup, it's mite. Don't ask me why; I thought it might only be unvoiced consonants (ku, su, tsu, etc) that resulted in "-tte," but the "-te" form of "uru" is "utte" so... ::shrugs:: Anyway, you should really post this on "Hunter x Hunter Fan Exchange;" a yaoi HxH yahoo group that I'm part of. You can participate in the challenge I'm running! ^_^ The URL is: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/hxh_fan_exchange/ Matao, BloodRaevynn
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Reviewed By: Akari-chan (not in the mood for login -_-) On: February 13, 2004 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG *_* I /need/ to read... moooooooooooooooooooooore *_* This is the best fic I /ever/ read! Really! I just /love/ GonXKillua, they´re soooooo cute, and you write this (one of my favorite´s part on HxH) perfectly, the character´s aren´t OOC, and I´m so curious to know how it will continue! I almost /died/ in chapter 5, and 6 was too cute too! Damn, all were cute! You must write more or *killua mode* I WILL KILL YOU!
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Reviewed By: bzarefav On: December 16, 2003 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv hunterxhunter but i can never find really good stuff on them. i just love your pairing!!! i've got all the dvds up to greed island! i heard they're commin out w/ a new one! i just can't wait. I luved the jap in the story cause every time i read it i had a flash back to the series. i luved the way u portrayed Gon. anyways i just wanted to tell u that i luv your story and please continue it. please? or just write lots more about HXH. that would be fine too ~_~
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Reviewed By: Neon ^-^ On: September 06, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh come on! You have to uptade this. Your fic is...well...AWESOME.
I'm sorry for my speech but I don't know English pretty well. |
Reviewed By: Netog On: August 22, 2003 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BUWHAHAHAHA!!! I am so suprised u only got 11 reviews for this fic!! it deserves so much more T_T.......well ne way i love this is ....just ^^; dang i forgot wat i was gunna say i do however like the japanese u put in to it!!! u better get the next chap soon!! |
Reviewed By: stray cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
^^not bad´...luv it. they´re just cute 2gether.
but i´m still searching for more fic´s of this kind...
btw, in hiragana u double the letter with a little sign, looks like "tsu", just smaller. in katakana its a simple line -- |
Reviewed By: Eathlinn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi, enjoyable story. I like it. Characters are rather well done, there is nice dialogue, seems to be some plot too and it is not too short. Things don't just simply happen. I think all these are good points. Some lacks on style, making it sometimes hard to read. don't be afraid to use words, there are plenty of them :)
What else can I say? I eagerly wait to see next chapter. ^^ |
Reviewed By: C-chan On: November 24, 2002 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAAH! EVERYTHING is SO KOOL about this fic!!
GAHAHAHAHA! 0_o
Dude... this has got to be like the 10th time I've read the story and it still cracks me up^^
*pets Killua on the head*
hehe^^ Sooo cute!!!
*pulls hand away before it gets bitten*
@_____@
So yaaaaaaaaa!! ^____^ I woulda rated this 23 out of 10... but then the farthest it could have gone was 10 so *shrug* We're going to have to deal with that ne??? *sigh*
so COME ON!! Next chapter and E-MAAAAAAIL me!! 0_0
Are you dead or something??? REPLY!!!!
*smile*
CIAO!!!!
GON AND KILLUA RUUUULES!!! |
Reviewed By: Shayla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 04:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Very good! Some grammar and spelling mistakes, but... who cares! Since I'm Polish, I didn't notice half of them. Don't worry, I guess that in this note I made at least 10 mistakes, didn't I? ^^ And... Killua and Gon, I love them both!!!! So cute! But don't put too much japanease words, it's a little irritating. It's not like I don't understand them, it's just... I don't know, it sounds stupid. ^^ But your fic is great! Write more! |
Reviewed By: Tomoe Yukida On: November 01, 2002 05:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Killua *V* -san,
Well, Im actually some sort of an amateuer writer, so i rated your style of writing as 9 because...well youre not perfect, as in pro-perfect. But it was goooood...And only 6 on S&G bec u had lots o wrong spellings n grammar, I had d impression u were in a hurry. ^_^ . O/C: the fic is ichiban and kawaii but its not really very orig or creative ne? not that its not orig, just not THAT original.*smiles sweetly* But Ive really ENJOYED this fic, hontou, truly I did.
And I loved the little japanese words/phrases inserted in the fic. By d way, its spelt "cordouroy".
Killua (you), sugoi ne? (your fic)
Tomoe |
Reviewed By: Kinu-uni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT!!! You can't end it there it is not fair!! *pouts* Why do people always do that?? You have to continue this soon!! The only reason for the Enjoyment Factor only getting a 9 was because of the WERY annoying ending if the last chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: Kleptomaniac Can Opener On: October 18, 2002 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! This fic is sooo good! That last chap had me =O.O= Keep it up!
=^_^=
MEOW! |
Reviewed By: cream_soda On: October 01, 2002 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^ Iiiyyyyaaa~ *squeals* This is great!!! I'm not exactly a Yaoi fan myself, but I think you write cute!!! (is upset cus she can't write Yaoi fics... > you rawk!!!) |
Reviewed By: Leila On: August 30, 2002 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply love it!
Your only fault (only in my opinion) is to use maybe too much Japenese. It's sometimes hard to understand even with the traduction at the end of the fic. I'm not used to go to the end everytime I see a Jap word(s) and then go back to where I was.
The spelling and Grammar rating is not there because I can't simply judge it as I'm not English myself.
But I'm awestruck at your fic. Too many people do Leolio/Kurapika pairings but they simply seem to forget about Gon and Kirua. I'm waiting for the next chapter... so WRITE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kay On: August 29, 2002 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aahhh! Finally! An awesome Killua x Gon fanfic! ::glomps with starry eyes:: Write mooooore? Pretty pretty please? I loved it! I can't wait to find out what happens-- eee, so CUUUTE. ^_^ You rock, ayi! |
Reviewed By: Rose Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
ACK!!! I need more of this fic!!! *begs* |
