| "Those Who Died" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 00:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
wat happened to kagome??? good chapter :]
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: valeries26 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good. I'm hoping you will post soon. Val
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 20:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the story so far i can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 00:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I like it well enough, you do have where/were errors though, I think every time you used where it should have been were; "Where" refers to a question about a location of something, such as: "Where is our table?" "Were" is the plural form of "was." For example:"I WAS at the concert last night. We WERE there all together with my friends."
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