| "Firewall" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Rev Prez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 23:04 CDT
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to aragonvaar: Next chapter centers around the battle at Point K.
to alphavt: I took what I like and could incorporate from the secondary sources. This fic is actually purist in the sense that it tries to follow a reasonable interpretation of the show's cue set, but hey...I'm a fan of everything. ;) |
Reviewed By: alphavt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 20:52 CDT
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You certainly give the battle a real modern military clockwork feel to it. I'm kind of surprised you kept the secondary sources' interpretations (not that I'm complaining). |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: July 21, 2002 20:48 CDT
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Good lead-up to and account of that tragic battle...where do we go from here? :) |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: July 21, 2002 20:46 CDT
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Interesting lead-up to and account of that tragic battle. Where do we go from here? |
