Reviewed By: Jmb_ On: May 05, 2009 22:44 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Pretty good.
Reviewed By: anima constrictor On: May 05, 2009 21:38 CDT Comment/Review: That was an impressive fanfiction. I realize it's just a one-shot but I think it would be interesting if you continued this with each of them finding out about the "affair"