Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: May 19, 2009 12:19 CDT Comment/Review: Nice work. I wish there were more details in each of the little vigniettes but it works quite well. I like the unifying theme that binds them together.
Reviewed By: rukialover On: May 11, 2009 16:27 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: This is such a good story!! I've actually never read anything like this before, which is crazy because most fics tend to "borrow" ideas from other fics. The only thing I think you should improve on is elaboration. I thought that a few more details and more dialogue would've made the story a whole lot better. But I still give you a 10 out of 10 :D Please write more!! p.s.... this is the first story I've ever reviewed on mediaminer... you should be honored... lol
