| "The Young Ones" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2011 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another update! And what a wonderful way of explaining what the crowns are and what they're doing. It was beautiful that Kagome immediately got rid of the rosary on Inuyasha, though I think I actually agree with Yasha's decision to keep the slave collar on for the time being. Technically, he does still belong to the Princess, and she probably doesn't have the power to free him. Plus, her father doesn't even know about the mating yet! He will stand beside her as her equal, but not yet. Somehow, though, I get the feeling he doesn't really mind belonging to her. ;-) Keep up the awesome work! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2011 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! Looks like things are coming to a close, but this is a truly awesome little story. It's not over yet, so I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next! :-) |
Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2011 21:09 EDT
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Yeah updates This just made my night |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2011 08:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I wasn't expecting another update so soon, not that I'm complaining! Cute word play with the chapter title, by the way. Glad to see that things are picking up. This ought to be interesting. |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2011 09:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! Glad to see this story is still going strong. Kagome's Oz comment made me chuckle. Looking forward to the next update. |
Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 22:35 EDT
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so happy to see and read another chapter it has been so long. I hope all is well. Another great chapter by the way :)
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Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2010 14:29 EDT
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why does it say is complete...are you going to finish it? please do so
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 00:29 EST
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so excited you got another chapter posted. This going back to school crap and laundry keep me from reading it right away. Love the chapter even with the looonnnnggg wait :)hehe Poor yasha and the princess, got what they said they wanted but now that they have it a little scared. Liked Inuyasha telling Kagome she was childish..LOL at least he get that he was too. Can't wait for more. Hope things are going well. Ever need any writting or school help I can try to help
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 00:25 EDT
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Stupid school, going back for another degree has really cut into my Inuyasha fanfic time :( I'm just now getting to your updates...ughhh. I have tomorrow off and I decided homework be darned I'm read my stories. Love love love. Aww, Inuyasha got the younger ones together. Love how he explained that one. Also loved how Kagome was a bit concerned the youger them were enjoying marking eacj other a bit too much LOL Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I knew you had something up your sleeve for Yasha and the Princess, you even told us yourself that you did. I love the way you pulled this off. Now her father can't ever separate them. Then there's the immortality thing... I can't recall, in this universe, did becoming mates not automatically increase the lifespan of the mortal? What a creative way around that! I've seen everything from souls merging to Midoriko granting wishes, but I've never seen magical waterfalls. Nicely done!
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 23:02 EDT
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OO so excited 3 Ch to read and each one as good as the next. I was wondering if the 4 would get seperated, since they are suppose to be the ones on the quest. Just love how Yasha and Princess act to each other..so refined no yelling..LOL When Kagome said she and Inuyasha felt like the 2 were their brother and sister, I thought humm just what I thought. And the part where Inuyasha'a morals kept Kagome at bay..I was laughing. Can't wait to read more. I hope you dog feels better. I know the nurseing a dog problen well. Right now I have one on antibiotics and steroids, we have LOTS of potty breaks. My other one has a bad knee and hip and my parents and I are always on our toes to keep her from jumping up and down on things. When I saw you say you dog, I thought o sure blame the dog for eating your story notes :)
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2009 01:00 EDT
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I thought you did a pretty good job with the action. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2009 01:00 EDT
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I thought you did a pretty good job with the action. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 23:38 EDT
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lol you know im kinda wondering if youll have kagome and inuyasha display their powers...lol im kinda excited for that partXD great story by the way...cant wait till the action pops up=)
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 23:21 EDT
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Made my night to find out I had a new chapter to read. Beats job searching. I loved it, good blance of substance and fluff, that I have come to know and love. Can't blame Inuyasha for wanting to get out on the road..apparently all play and no work makes Inuyasha a sad hanyou. :)
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