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Reviewed By: Love it On: October 15, 2023 23:11 PDT
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I've been a longtime fan of yours and have been re-reading this fic
(and your others) many times over the years. I know life can get
busy and priorities change, but please, we would love an update to
this fic, i promise you that you still have plenty of fans waiting
who would love to read this as a completed fic. I hope everything
is going well in your life otherwise! Thank you for all your hard
work so far
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Reviewed By: Love it On: October 15, 2023 23:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
I've been a longtime fan of yours and have been re-reading this fic
(and your others) many times over the years. I know life can get
busy and priorities change, but please, we would love an update to
this fic, i promise you that you still have plenty of fans waiting
who would love to read this as a completed fic. I hope everything
is going well in your life otherwise! Thank you for all your hard
work so far
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2017 23:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been so long since I've read/reviewed this extraordinary piece
of work. This chapter was sexy and funny. The Krillin/18 scene was
fantastic! I think yours is the first K/18 lemon I've read. From
18's erotic nonchalance, to Krillin's worried horniness, I think
you've nailed what sex would be like between the two of them
perfectly. And can I say Krillin's proposal was pure GOLD? Well I'm
gonna say it: Krillin's proposal to 18 was pure fucking GOLD! It
was awkward for the both of them, but so very much like them, that
it just fit. And poor Goku and Chichi, just when they're trying to
mend their broken marriage, Goku's wasting worsens. I do hope
Goku's able to pull through, especially since Vegeta already noted
Goku's untapped potential to become a Super Saiyan earlier in the
story, even with Goku's lagging body. And I wanted to mention that
to you about Vegeta's insecurities of Goku. Everyone else thinks
Goku's deteriorating health is a lost cause except for Goku and
Vegeta (even though Vegeta puts up a good front for his
subordinates). Goku believes Bulma can fully restore him back to
health. And Vegeta believes Goku can eventually match his power as
a Super Sayian, if not outright surpass him. I told you before I'm
glad you incorporated Vegeta's insecurities concerning Goku in this
story. It not only keeps Vegeta's characterization align with his
anime personality, but it also makes the reader root for Goku to be
the beloved hero once again. Something tells me our lovable, goofy
Saiyan is going to be fully healed, but how will it happen, and
will Goku ever match the Saiyan Prince's strength and possibly
surpass it? Frieza's looming confrontation with the Saiyans is the
main plot and forefront of this story, but I have to say (in my
humble opinion), the story-line featuring Vegeta and Goku's
strength/health is far more intriguing. I impatiently anticipate
how you're going to conclude their situation. And for the chapter's
closer, let's face it: coming IS fucking fabulous! Especially every
time I come here and read new chapters of your story!
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Reviewed By: amandamdlucia On: January 28, 2016 10:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that if one waits almost an year for an update it is
only because the work is worth it. Each chapter is brilliant,
unpredictable, deep and interesting. I've read the whole fanfiction
three times now and I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw an
update. It is no doubt one of the best fanfictions of all - and I
mean not only in DBZ fandom. You are very talented and I hope you
don't stop writing this story, for I am a huge fan! The characters
are complex in their motivations, flaws and relations. The lemon
is... wow. It leaves me breathless. Keep on with the good work!
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Title: Thank u!
Reviewed By: Preciousjade76 On: January 18, 2016 22:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this chapter had it all. A little humor, a lot of steam, and a
tense moment at the end. I. Loved. It! Girl, your lemons get better
and better. I have read all your fics and you never seem to
disappoint. Can't wait to see how bulma reacts to vegeta the next
day. Hope she makes him grovel a bit.
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Title: Ah babe!
Reviewed By: Animelover6000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2015 15:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely as always, lol that bickering between Bulma and Nappa. I
hope to see some radditz and paur action soon actually, I've grown
to like them XD. Until next time love.
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Title: Yay new chapter!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2015 21:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't get enough of your writing. Every chapter is a joy to read.
I really love the nappa and bulma moments in this chapter. I can
just imagine that this is how they really would interact if he was
around.
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Title: Yay new chapter!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2015 21:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't get enough of your writing. Every chapter is a joy to read.
I really love the nappa and bulma moments in this chapter. I can
just imagine that this is how they really would interact if he was
around.
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Title: Such a great day for Dragonball
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2015 22:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy you updated today, the day when Dragonball Super came
out! A new chapter and edits? I'm going to have to go back through
and read the whole thing again... as I've been meaning to. I like
this Nappa/Bulma/Vegeta love triangle. Poor Nappa just wants his
prince's attention, I'm sure. haha Krillin is so insecure right
now. I feel for him, but 18 (like in the actual show) cares about
him even if she's so cold. He just needs to realize that. Thanks
again for updating! It's always a pleasure to read and I'm glad
that you are still updating, instead of abandoning the fanfic.
Can't wait to reread and remind myself of all the details! I'll
keep my eyes peeled for another update too! Until next time!
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Reviewed By: Animelover6000 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2015 14:30 PDT
Comment/Review:
oooooo I love it as usual!!! Ca't wait for another update! Story
goes well. I have faith that you will finish this story no problem
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Title: How did I miss this?
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2015 22:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Somehow I missed this update two months ago. But OMG I'm so glad to
see another update on this story! What's gonna happen to Veggie? I
gotta know. Hope he doesn't scalp himself... but that would be an
interesting twist. This is an Alt. Universe after all. Loving the
innuendos from Raddiz. I started reading this story so long ago.
It's crazy, but I'm happy that you are still updating even if it is
a little at a time. I'm going to make it a point to reread the
entire thing next time there is an update. I hope that is soon. ;)
Great job as usual! Can't wait for the next one! I'll try not to
miss it by two months next time.
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Reviewed By: YayVengeanceIsBack! On: April 08, 2015 19:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wahoo! I'm thrilled that you're sticking with this story; it's
hands-down my favorite fic of all time! I've re-read it about 6
times now, and I'm always impressed at how it consistently makes me
split my sides with laughter, bite my nails in anticipation, and
just get lost in the great world and characters you've created.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2015 14:01 PDT
Comment/Review:
I don't know words vivid enough to explain my excitement of seeing
an update notice :D Though I do wish for more since its been so
long :( I've missed your work :) Thank you for the update :) I am
excited about the wedding.
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Reviewed By: Hannah_Tendo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2015 05:12 PST
Comment/Review:
You're amazing! Just spend the last 4 days reading your
fanfiction... and it was splendid!
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Reviewed By: WJS Nominations On: September 28, 2014 23:30 PDT
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On be half of the 2014 Semi-annual WJS awards, I am proud to
announce that your fanfiction/fanart has been nominated by your
fans and will be in the running for a 1st, 2nd, or 3rd place spot
on our community and website. 'Vengeance' is Nominated for 'Best
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running! -WJS Nominations
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