| "Vengeance" Reviews/Comments [ 371 ] |
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2011 15:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is great! Ive been reading this whole story the last few days on my phone (and im now reviewing it from my phone as well so please forgive my crappy punctuation :p). So far this story is truly great and has been a huge enjoyment for me the last few days :) I really love your writing style and character development. I also love how you keep characters in character and develop the ones who we dont really know a ton about in a believeable fashion, like Radditz and Paur for example, which is a totally adorable couple btw ;) I cant wait to read your next update and I eagerly await it! |
Title: another great chapter
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 19:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad u tied in how vegeta and Yamcha met. It's sad that he died, but I like b/v better. I always get excited when I get the email that you've updated. Hope u update again soon. |
Title: another great chapter
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 19:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad u tied in how vegeta and Yamcha met. It's sad that he died, but I like b/v better. I always get excited when I get the email that you've updated. Hope u update again soon. |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: February 21, 2011 18:47 PST
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:D :D Well depressing. Never been a Yamcha fan but none the less I feel bad again for him having to die that way. :( Love Puar. Also super happy for the update! Been too long :) |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2011 17:29 PST
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Pretty good chapter. I'm not a big fan of Yamcha but it got much more interesting with Vegeta there :3. It's always good to have back story but now I'm wondering if this is foreshadowing... kind of like how tv shows remind you of what happened a month ago before they introduce a related topic. Anyway good job! As usual, I'll be waiting for the next one. |
Reviewed By: DeadRabbit92 On: February 21, 2011 11:15 PST
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GREAT JOB! man i hope bulma doesnt find out...though that would make you writing this sort of pointless so im sure she will. update soon. |
Reviewed By: fazkataz On: February 16, 2011 09:16 PST
Comment/Review:
I have been reading your story ever since you uploaded chapter 15 (that must have been a year ago). "Vengeance" is one of very few Dragonball fanfiction that makes me want to check mediaminer for updates every week (I know that would be ongodly fast for updates). Please don't stop writing! I have made a fanart of one of my favourite scenes in the story. with your permission, i left it on my deviantart for now, I can take it down if you want to. link: http://fazkataz.deviantart.com/art/Vengeance-Fan-Art-01-197679567 |
Reviewed By: Genesis105 On: January 26, 2011 02:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading your fanfictions many years ago, but took a few years break from fanfiction. I came back to find Vengeance, and it's fantastic! I really think you've improved a lot. Your story flows much better and the humour made me laugh out loud, which is rare. The reason I gave you a 9 for spelling and grammar is because of the way you use your quotation marks. I'm not an expert on English, but I was always under the impression that the full stop comes at the VERY END of a sentence. For example: "I hate you." Said Bulma. VS "I hate you," said Bulma. Your story is fantastic - one of the best I've ever read, but this little thing keeps jarring me out of the story, and I've noticed it's been happening since I first started reading your fanfiction. Again, I'm not an expert, so don't take my words for truth. Maybe the style of writing is different in your country. ^^ Anyway, I'm enjoying the story so far, and can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2011 21:19 PST
Comment/Review:
Glad Bulma found that information about Cell, but something tells me that it's not over yet. Though I will feel bad for 16 if things go sour. It's no wonder Bulma equated Vegeta's saying he wouldn't have killed her to love. That's probably the closest thing she's going to get to a declaration of love until Vegeta admits his feelings to himself. haha As always,great chapter! :3 |
Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2011 14:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome as usual! I wonder what you're going to do with the androids. I hope Goku is able to go ssj. More Puar/Radditz please! XD Can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: January 17, 2011 11:03 PST
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>.< well here is me crossing my fingers hoping that was your way of saying no cell, and hopefully no evil androids :) lol and I sure hope Vegeta is gonna kick some ass soon. :) or some one kicks some ass. oh & Zarbon + Burter? didnt see that :P |
Reviewed By: LareBearr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2011 08:54 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this. I couldn't stop reading it. I remember spotting it the last couple of..erm...years, but I was like "guerilla warfare? really? lame." But it crossed my sights again the other day, and I decided to just read it. I'm glad I did. You've done a very good job with characterization and plot. I even laughed a few times. You're an excellent writer, and I only spotted a few grammatical/spelling errors. I love Radditz and Puar; who would've thunk it lol. Of course I love B/V, too, and G/CC. Can't wait for the next update! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Animelover6000 On: January 09, 2011 09:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHA I love it, i can't wait until another chapter. i've been reading this for a while now but only now got around to reviewing. i need to make a account for mediaminer lolz. until next update love see ya ^^ |
Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2011 13:23 PST
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So happy for the update :) I feel so sorry for Goku, and even though I know this is a Vegeta-centric fic, I am jealous on Goku's behalf that Vegeta got Super Saiyan first lol |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: December 30, 2010 10:05 PST
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ZOMG GOKU!!!!!! At first I thought gohan snapped and almost killed him lol. but damn you gave me more reasons to have Vegeta fantasies... damn you. lol. but seriously thank you for the update that was awesome! |
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