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| "Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Me likey!
Reviewed By: martianbunny01 On: October 02, 2010 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story! I enjoy reading one shots because they can be soo unique. Most of the time, however, they revolve around the same things, two characters just realizing love or initiating lust. Also, then the overuse of lust spells and heat. However, the idea of a kitsune needing to heal using lustful energy is quite unique and I really enjoyed it! The characterizations were good; the nervousness and tensions were pretty good; the lemony action was great (believable and delicious, with adequate build up); and the general plot was good. I would say that this is a good fan fiction! (I'm harsh on ratings so don't take it personally. I just think that lying to an author is worse than not reviewing)
| Reviewed By: MiiVii On: December 17, 2009 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why this story doesn't have any reviews. It was written in character and it was...very very enjoyable 83 I love this story, awesomely fantastical job!
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