| "Passions Price" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: PrettyLintu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2011 14:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This REALLY made me giggle! |
Reviewed By: Choldeblonde003 On: May 15, 2005 19:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
STRANGE BUT GOOD I HATE THE FACT THA THE "OLD BULMA" WENT WITH SEVENTEEN THOUGH IT WASNT REALLY EVEN A B/V, AND BULMA WOULDNT HAVE GONE WITH 17 WILLINGLY ANYWAYS THAT WAS A VERY AWSOME STORY
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 23, 2004 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, it was cute, but I wish you would've made it longer. I loved the chapter when you brought all the bad guys in, it was really funny! I think I liked this story a lot better then the first, mainly because, like I said before, I think Bulma/Vegeta were made for each other. And I hate 17!
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Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 23, 2004 17:43 EDT
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Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 22, 2002 11:30 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ye gods, vegeta is creepy! i hope maybe he somehow comes out of his insanity, or something. good so far! |
Reviewed By: summer_starlet On: July 22, 2002 06:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
this is pretty interesting...keep writing :) |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 24, 2002 09:14 EDT
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i think the wrong chapter was posted for chapter two. i think it's from another fic. oh well!! |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OoOoOoOo
keep writing its great !!! |
