| "Brothers & Sisters" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start for a fanfic. You should have something suprising happen like Misty ditches Gary or something. Keep Writing! |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris On: March 30, 2002 04:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Plz continue... |
Reviewed By: strider Li [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2002 19:52 CST
Comment/Review:
write another chapter. You're doing great. Good luck and keep on writing. |
Reviewed By: Da Weasle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2002 05:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes yes yes! please continue! Wow, someone finally noticed how smart that little doll baby is! dosent he just look like a doll baby with those huge eyes!?!? ..errhhmmm.... as I was saying please continue! |
Reviewed By: *Maura* On: September 06, 2001 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love how you're writing this fic so far. The POV is excellent and really makes you feel like the character. I can't wait to read more! Please do continue to write. I bet Misty and Gary really did have a great time or something and then something or other happens and somehow Ash and Misty get together at long last. Am I right? Lol. Probably not but anyway, more soon I hope! |
