| "You Get What You Wish For!" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: really really good
Reviewed By: Audra On: December 04, 2003 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Sakura no Hime On: June 30, 2003 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it. It is really good. please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: chiara [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it a lot pleeaasseee continue soon |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW ... you're right, as far as I know of, NO one has done this before ... except for you! ;)
Gee, this idea is so simple ... that it SHOULD have been obvious. I can't WAIT to see where this goes.
A little question, I know you said Goku's 13 in this, so ... how old are Vegeta and Bulma!?!? Sorry, I just NEED to know so I stop seeing them as their adult(and still age illusive) selves.
Ch! Yamcha's gonna be a jerk, isn't he. I know he'll do at least ONE thing to discouraged/sabotage Vegeta and Bulma (whether it be conscious or subconscious). I mean, he MAY have Bulma's best interest at heart and think that protecting her/keeping them apart is his duty ... but they say the road to hell is paved with good intentions. I just hope that he doesn't hurt Bulma at all.
Speaking of Vegeta/Bulma's ages ... are they too young for a lemon!? *lol* Just kidding ...
That's kind of cool that Vegeta's going to train Goku. Hell, it's almost TOO nice. But still ... I'm kind of proud of his choice to train a fellow and so-called "third-class" saiyan.
*lol* ...I REALLY am starting to like V/B fics TOO much... but especially yours ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo Goodie! It's set in Dragonball! Let me know what's next! batgirl4575@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 22, 2002 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, now what? Prince Vegeta has obviously just been interrupted...the question is, what was he doing, and is he going to KILL Bulma for the interruption?
I can't wait to find out.
Jada |
Reviewed By: SuperGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2002 12:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm I'd expect something like this from you MSP, hmm what are you going to do now?
Hurry up and write me the next chapter lol
SG |
Reviewed By: Silenced [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2002 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhhh keep writing this is great |
