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| "Love Is Like A Flower, It Blooms And Dies" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lady Hiroko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2009 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good fic. A little cliched beginning but it's still good and enjoyable. Only one misspelled word found, "shadder" should be "shatter". The writing style needs a little tweaking which will take practice. Even I suck at writing since I lack originality and misspell common words sometimes. I even sometimes skip sentences. lol. That's why I prefer betaing and reviewing. Anyway, stick with it and you shall go far.
| Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2009 22:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you got the beginnings of a good story. You should continue the story no matter what and reviews will come. But it helps if you have more than one chapter to go off of. I hope you stick with this story. Good luck!
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