"Frozen Lips" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Hitachiincest Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 11:18 CDT Comment/Review: Aww that's really cute. I like it.
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Reviewed By: Darkstar2010 On: June 03, 2009 07:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: A really good short story, well structured and highly descriptive. Could do with an extension or follow up on this story.
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Reviewed By: voren On: June 03, 2009 05:06 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a fun fic to read but it could do with a bit more story
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