| "Jewel Shard's Bail Bonds" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I chapter 9. Please write me in the story so I can push Koga off a cliff. I know I know, Koga will get what's coming to him I can't wait till that happens. I'll be a good girl and wait. Please Please update soon :) P.S..I'M REALLY SORRY FOR REVIEWING TWICE...BUT HELL THE STORY IS GOOD.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 22:54 EDT
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...i dont know if i like this chapter or not... i mean, it was good. and obviously an important one... but it just left so much unsaid... then again, im sure that was the point... anywho, dispite my misgivings it was a good chapter, cant wait for the next one...
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 8 and how you set it up. From everyones point of view. that was so cool. I can't wait till chapter 9. Please have Inuyasha kick Koga's ass. Will we find out who he was talking to on the phone was it really a business call? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2009 02:11 EDT
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oh my god im so sorry... ive been reading this story for a while now, and have been too lazy to leave a review... but when i saw that you only had two i felt so bad. this story is great, please dont stop updating because there are so many people like me who are just to lazy to leave a word of encouragement. i really do like this story, and though i could do without the rin/sesshoumaru pairing, i just skim over that part...
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Reviewed By: Colin112 On: June 28, 2009 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far with good writing and a different plot which is nice to see. Looking forward to seeing and reading more. Just don't have Kagome be raped by Kouga because rape is awful. The fact thet have fooled around is enough torture but Yash is going to have work to get her. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I finally caught up with this story I stop to read your other story 'What Happens in Vegas. Your good.
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